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PostSubject: Necrose Macelar   Tue May 22, 2012 1:21 am

Roleplay Type: Dark Equestria
Name: Necrose Macelar
Sex: Stallion
Age: 26
Species: Earth Pony
Eye Color: Emerald
Coat Color: Black
Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Smoke gray, long and unkempt
Physique: Tall and muscular
Cutie Mark: A pony skull
Origin/Residence: Stalliongrad, but now wanders Equestria
Occupation: Ex-soldier, adventurer
Motivation: Revenge, the greater good, peace
Likes: Freedom, sleeping, eating, traveling, helping ponies
Dislikes: Bullies, tyrants, the Equestrian military, tax collectors, injustice
Character Summary:

History: Necrose was born in Stalliongrad, the youngest of three. He was always tall and strong for his age, so naturally, the military wanted him. He was always rebellious, scoffing at the so-called authority of the guards and ponies who ran Equestria, so he refused when he was drafted. This did not sit particularly well with the Empresses, whose authority was being challenged by a commoner, so they ordered him conscripted. When he refused a second time, he was given an ultimatum: Either join the military, or watch his family be executed, then be executed himself. Despite his parents' and older siblings' protests, to the pony each claiming they would rather die, the young stallion finally gave in and joined the military, not wanting to see them killed, much to his family's dismay.

For his rebelliousness, Necrose was put through the most difficult training regimen a common soldier would be allowed to face without forcing them to specialize in anything, while continuing to threaten him with the executions of his family should he step a hoof out of line and not do as he was told. This continued until he was declared a full-time soldier in the Equestrian military. His first assignment: Guard duty in Stalliongrad, as punishment for all the back-talking and refusing to follow orders he did, even with his family's deaths being a possible result of his insubordination. His homecoming was a bittersweet one, as neither he nor his family could look at the other or say anything, the only consolation being that the government and military had at that point lived up to their word that should he comply, they would be allowed to live, even after he proved just as rebellious as before he joined.

Years would pass, and Necrose would do as he was ordered, albeit unwillingly, leading to some promotions, eventually making captain of his own unit. He chose not to lead his unit well, and so was demoted, but this was in line with what he wanted, not a punishment in his eyes, as he never wanted to be a leader in this army in the first place. A few more years would pass, and he would be promoted to captain again, this time under constant supervision and his superiors with orders not to demote him under any circumstances. The army had come to value him, despite his insubordination and rebelliousness, and so was not content to let somepony valuable to them be less than they felt he should be, even if he were so reckless as to tell a high-ranking officer to their face that they could go buck themself when he recieved a direct order from them to take his unit to a town where some common ponies had become restless and needed putting down.

Every day in the army was a struggle for Necrose, with his superiors exerting more and more control over him with each unwanted promotion and him pushing right back by any means he saw necessary, going so far as to subtly help ponies, rather than oppress them. Under normal circumstances, such a rebellious pony in the military would not receive promotions, let alone be allowed to continue to serve, or live for that matter, but Necrose was being forced to serve, and several high-ranking officers, and even the Sun tyrant herself, were enjoying themselves watching him struggle. Things came to a head between Necrose and the army when a town needed defending from a particularly well-organized group of ponies. At first, Necrose did as he was ordered and fought the rebels, but at one point during the battle when he was ordered to kill the supposed leader, he finally snapped and attacked his superior. It was at this point that a magical explosion of unknown origin rocked the site and destroyed not only the town, but almost everypony, rebel and Equestrian military, who was there. Necrose, however, was on the receiving end of a lucky break when he was flung a considerable distance from the site and collided with a tree, somehow surviving both the explosion and the impact.

After the battle, which was deemed a devastating failure for both sides, a team of unicorns was sent to the site to magically search for any survivors, but found that their magic was useless in the area, forcing them to look with their eyes. Necrose's tags were found, but not his body. Being unable to use magic in this area, it was guessed that his body was destroyed in the explosion, as were so many other ponies. Another attempt to find him was made far from the site of the zone of nullified magic, but no response came from the locator spells anypony cast. Unbeknownst to anypony in the military or the Empresses, however, Necrose dragged his battered body away from the tree he hit and has been wandering Equestria freely since, helping impoverished and oppressed ponies to the best of his abilities.

Parents: The youngest son of Black Rose and Mortimer, a funeral director and mortician, respectively. They understood what was at stake when their youngest child was conscripted into the Equestrian military after reaching the age where all able-bodied ponies are considered elligible for the draft, but were heartbroken all the same. They remain in Stalliongrad and rarely hear from their son, but were overjoyed the day they learned he lives and has escaped the military and taken to fighting to try to free Equestria from the stranglehold it's been held in for so many years. They hide their pride in their son, as well as the knowledge that he still lives, for fear of what will happen to him if he is discovered, but are proud of him all the same.

Cutie Mark Story: Necrose obtained his cutie mark when he buried a pony who was killed in the streets of Stalliongrad after attempting to stand up to the guards posted there, who were extorting a shopkeeper for extra taxes and threatening witnesses to keep them quiet. Why he chose to bury the pony, Necrose may never know, he just did, but he obtained his cutie mark when he finished burying the brave, if seemingly foolish, mare and found he wasn't tired after his exertions. His cutie mark, a pony skull, indicates a tireless determination to do a job, any job, and stick with it until it's done, as the dead have no reason to get tired any longer.

Flaws: After serving the nightmarish government of Equestria for most of his adult life so far and being unable to do anything about it, Necrose has developed an irrational hatred of order, structure, and control. He is gruff and reclusive, and has a very hard time trying to keep his emotions in check whenever he observes injustice. Also has a violent temper.

Personality: Necrose is a quiet pony, at least as far as he can be when ponies oppress others. He hates that there are ponies who were born a certain way and think that because of that, they can name themselves rulers of the country and do with it whatever they please. After serving such ponies for a good 7 years, during which he was rapidly promoted as a means to torture him, he has come to detest military and government alike, feeling with good reason that the best way for ponies to live is to defend and govern themselves. However, he is not unreasonable, and likes to think that the right kind of government would be fine, provided it doesn't treat the ponies he wants to save the same way the current one does. He cares about the well-being of others, even during his time in the army, and so devoted his combat training to be more defensive, so that he can put himself in harm's way, while other, less robust ponies stay behind him and approach combat their way or flee.

Necrose Macelar
Male Earth Pony Fighter 5
Chaotic Good

Strength 18 +4
Dexterity 15 +2
Constitution 16 +3
Intelligence 13 +1
Wisdom 13 +1
Charisma 12 +1

Size: Medium
Height: 6' 3"
Weight: 260 lbs
Coat: Black
Eyes: Emerald
Mane and tail: Gray, long

Total Hit Points: 49

Speed: 20 ft. (armor)

Armor Class: 26 = 10 + 9 (armor) + 6 (shield) + 1 (Dexterity)

Touch AC: 12
Flat-Footed: 25
Initiative: 2 (Dexterity)
Fortitude Save: 8 = 4 (base save) + 3 (ability modifier) + 1 (miscellaneous modifier)
Reflex Save: 4 = 1 + 2 + 1
Will Save: 5 = 1 + 1 + 3
Attack (handheld): +9 = 5 (base) + 4 (Strength) + 1 (Weapon) + 1 (Weapon Focus) - 2 (shield)
Attack (unarmed): +9 = 5 + 4
Attack (missile): +7 = 5 (base) + 2 (Dexterity)
Grapple check: +9 = 5 (base) + 4 (Strength)

Light load:
Medium load:
Heavy load:
Lift over head:
Lift off ground:
Push or drag:
150 lbs. or less
151 - 300 lbs.
301 - 450 lbs.
450 lbs.
900 lbs.
2250 lbs.

Languages: Common, Zebra

+1 Battleaxe 1d8 + 7 (+4 [strength] + 1 [weapon] +2 [Weapon Specialization])

+1 Full plate armor (heavy; +9 AC; +1 max dex; check penalty -5; weight 50 lbs.)

+1 Heartening Psionic Mithril Tower shield (Tower shield; +6 AC; +4 max dex; check penalty -6; weight 22.5 lbs; Gain +5 temporary Hit Points for 4 minutes 1/day)


Endurance (Cutie Mark bonus feat)
Iron Will (+2 to Will saves)
Weapon Focus x1 (Battleaxe)
Shield Specialization (Tower) (+1 AC while using selected shield)
Combat Reflexes
Weapon Specialization x1 (Battleaxe)

Skill Name
Ability Skill
Modifier Ability
Modifier Ranks Misc.
Appraise Int 1 = +1
Balance Dex* -9 = +2 - 11
Bluff Cha 1 = +1
Climb Str* -6 = +4 + 1 - 11
Concentration Con 3 = +3
Craft_1 Int 9 = +1 + 8
Craft_2 Int 9 = +1 + 8
Craft_3 Int 9 = +1 + 8
Diplomacy Cha 1 = +1
Disguise Cha 1 = +1
Escape Artist Dex* -9 = +2 - 11
Forgery Int 1 = +1
Gather Information Cha 1 = +1
Handle Animal Cha 2 = +1 + 1
Heal Wis 1 = +1
Hide Dex* -9 = +2 - 11
Intimidate Cha 2 = +1 + 1
Jump Str* -6 = +4 + 1 -11 (speed 20)
Listen Wis 1 = +1
Move Silently Dex* -9 = +2 - 11
Ride Dex 3 = +3
Search Int 1 = +1
Sense Motive Wis 1 = +1
Spot Wis 1 = +1
Survival Wis 1 = +1
Swim Str** -17 = +4 + 1 - 22
Use Rope Dex 2 = +2

* = check penalty for wearing armor

Earth Pony:

Unfamiliar race. Adjustments already included.

+2 strength

+0 dexterity

+0 constitution

+0 intelligence

+0 wisdom

+0 charisma

Edit sheet & write details here as needed.

Be sure to know bonuses to skills, special abilities, low-light / dark vision, and any natural armor class bonus.


Bonus Feats (already included)

Class HP rolled
Level 1: Fighter 10
Level 2: Fighter 9
Level 3: Fighter 7
Level 4: Fighter 3 +1 to Constitution
Level 5: Fighter 10

Necrose's Equipment:

6 lbs.
50 lbs.
22.5 lbs.

33.5 lbs.

1 lb.

113 lbs. Weapon / Armor / Shield (from above)
Belt pouch
Flint and steel
Sunrods X2
Trail rations X10
Cloak of Resistance
Potion of Cure Moderate Wounds X3

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PostSubject: Re: Necrose Macelar   Tue May 22, 2012 7:12 am

Very nice, though I feel the red color of the text is a bit much
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